WALHT use describing words to enhance our writing.
I found this tricky because I couldn't think of that much words to put in.
Next time I would like to add more words.
Mrs Mundy said that even though my story was short she understood that I was really bored.
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Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
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